Scenic

Charybdis · 24-03-2001, 11:15 PM

This was an attempt to put down a daydream onto paper...err... well, you know what I mean. Thanks for any compliments ahead of time but severe criticism would much more appreciated. With any luck this link might actually work...

http://www.geocities.com/c_bass609/beach2.jpg

**Atomic** · 25-03-2001, 12:41 AM

I don't think you can use geocities anymore. so the pics not working

Foryth · 25-03-2001, 12:59 AM

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Originally posted by Commander Atomic
I don't think you can use geocities anymore. so the pics not working

Atomic, i thought you already knew this. Just copy and paste the link in your browser.

**Atomic** · 25-03-2001, 01:12 AM

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Originally posted by Foryth

Atomic, i thought you already knew this. Just copy and paste the link in your browser.

i do. that's the first thing i did. if that doesn't work then i change the www to fp. either that or i download the thing, and i'm to lazy to download it at the moment

Foryth · 25-03-2001, 01:31 AM

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Originally posted by Commander Atomic

i do. that's the first thing i did. if that doesn't work then i change the www to fp. either that or i download the thing, and i'm to lazy to download it at the moment

Hmm... thats strange, it worked fine for me from the first step.

jackal · 25-03-2001, 06:14 AM

Best method is to type in the address itself.

It looks pretty cool (maybe a tad too big file-wise) and the leaves look like a collage. Maybe a more defined sense of depth (outwards towards the horizon) would have been good. What program was used for that?

**Atomic** · 25-03-2001, 06:23 AM

i wiped my temp net file folder and tried again. it works this time. if you don't mind me saying, i think it looks real good. however in my opinion, i think the horizon should be a bit more visible and the palm tree less cardboard looking....that's just my opinion...no offense

Nulani · 25-03-2001, 12:05 PM

... It's kewl!...

I think Jackal is right at the sense of depth, and the palm three thing... I also think the bottom left corner looks a bit empty and dull..

Celes Chere · 25-03-2001, 04:01 PM

Wow it's so pretty! I love where the water hits the sand, it's so clean! (unlike the beaches where I live ^^;;

Charybdis · 26-03-2001, 04:54 PM

*takes notes*
Well thanks for the help

Oh, I'm using Microsoft Picture It. Wish I had something better but you work with what you've got.