Jojo's Bizarre Adven. and DBZ sketch

jackal · 15-03-2002, 10:30 AM

Well it's been awhile but I haven't really been drawing anything for afew months...

First one is Jotaro Kujo from Jojo's Bizarre Adventure and this is my first attempt at him (with slight reference).

jackal · 15-03-2002, 10:32 AM

and then one of future trunks which was actually an accident... I wasn't trying to draw him but when it looked like him, I decided to turn him into trunks.

AnkaraStark · 15-03-2002, 11:17 AM

Whoa!!!

nice job!

#1. I have no criticism to offer for this piece. The details of the picture are sensational. You've done a spectacular job with it- truly looks terrific. Great job!

#2. Very, very nice. Again, I have no criticism to offer. It looks stupendous the way it is. I sincerely hope that you continue drawing and posting it here as well!

Larisha UDG · 15-03-2002, 11:23 AM

those are so beautiful *tear drop* ^_^ i like em! ... you know... my bday is comin up... (in september!

) hehe im kidding... those were so very nice... *is jealous... i cant draw*

Evangelion-00 · 15-03-2002, 12:05 PM

Impressive!!!!

I really like the sketchy lines!

#1. Great job on the shadings, folds and on the pose and character design! No C&C's here.

#2. Very good, now I know how a real-life Trunks kinda look like.
I do have critic on this one, I think his neck is a bit too thick and maybe a very tiny bit too long.

You've done a great job on those 2, keep up the good work eh jackal!!!!

Ekaterini · 15-03-2002, 12:11 PM

Woo, nice sketches! On the first one though, his leg on your right looks like it going up too much.

Nulani · 15-03-2002, 02:13 PM

.. and Jackal returns in his full grandeour...

---C&C:

#1; You've done a very good job. However, I believe his knee is going out too much, certainly he'd have problems keeping his balance? Impressive shading.

#2; You've once again done a very good job. I doubt his neck should be that long though, and perhaps it's a bit too thick like Evangelion-00 suggests.

I hope you'll keep up the good work, and start posting your art more often.

Foxxe · 16-03-2002, 12:49 AM

You're skill is awesome jackal. I love the trunks!!!

GdsAkuma · 16-03-2002, 04:18 PM

wahhh~ your art is so awesome!! X_X

I luv your use of ink as always~ *_* superb shading and rendering. I luv the Trunks one...the expression is so gweat!! What pens do you use for inking? ^_^;; the only ones I've seen come close to the line width and style are rapidoliners....but anyhoo, awesome job!! Keep up the awesome work!

jackal · 17-03-2002, 03:39 AM

I just use ordinary ball point pens but I use the smooth ones that lay down the ink softly.

Well, thanks everyone, here's one in colour that I just finished today for anyone else who may come back.

Callisto · 17-03-2002, 10:45 AM

Those are great pics ya got there!

Goku_J · 19-03-2002, 01:44 PM

there both not bad but they look likes two kids down my street

Evangelion-00 · 19-03-2002, 01:49 PM

Cool!!!!

The last one you posted is very good!!!! I like the sketchy lines here and there.
Good job on the CG and on the character.
Hmmm.........he looks very familiar........is he a character from a videogame.......he really looks like Bahn from 'Fighting Vipers'.
Keep up the good work!!!!

jackal · 20-03-2002, 10:49 AM

Yeah I also made that obsevation as well but I can assure you that Bahn was influenced by Jojo! Capcom also brought out a fighting game on the manga so that's where you may have seen him before. I will try and draw a couple more characters from the show soon cause they have interesting character designs especially the STANDS in the show (kinda like summons in FF that all the main characters have).