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Old 21-08-2007, 07:44 PM   #1   [permalink]
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KAZUKAN [the title of my story] - though I may or may not change the title, except I actually don't even know what Kazukan means -_-'


This show is about a young teenager called Jaden and his friends Cyrus, Tara, and Max. They have all graduated to become young cadets in the Ki Academy. An academy made mainly for someone to learn Ki control to become great warriors later on to fight Evil. There has been fairly a lot of evil stuff going on too. Anyway, Jaden, Cyrus, Tara, and Max have passed the test to graduate, granting them a Shirt with the Ki Academy logo on it [not sure about sticking with that name for the academy but it'll do for now]. Along with some armor plates that they must put on everyday, they've also learned swordsmanship. Them all being granted their sword and sheath that they also must bring with them to the Academy. The academy is like a job pretty much, and they are on duty much of the day. They were finally able to do missions, like capture a wanted alien thief that stole valuable jewels. He got caught and put up a bit of a fight until their Master [don't know name yet] took over and dominated the thief and knocked him out cold by chop at the back of his neck. They took him away and through him behind bars. Although, not a normal jail cell considering some aliens can be much stronger than normal human and has different powers like mutants and other creatures they are put behind special bars that let a shock to the person when you touch the bars. Also, it's like a steel gate pretty much that they are confined to that can also send an electric shock to the person trying to escape. So basically they're doing anything in their power to keep them from escaping. So they are basically Earth's protectors. Well, that's about all I have so far. I'm not sure on how my many villains will appear later on. But I've already made a fair amount of bad guys, just haven't gotten them in this story yet. If you have any ideas that could help me it would be appreciated! Thanks!


To sort of explain the alien on earth thing, uhh yah -_-' and I might post what the Earth is like in my cartoon. Because it's not exactly like the Earth we see, for example, it's a bit more like the world in DBZ than the real world. Like living with aliens, and Dinosaurs not being all completely extinct, stuff like that. I hope I made at least a little bit of sense to you guys/girls. -_-'


Here are the character bios


Jaden

http://meilinli.deviantart.com/art/Gohan-SS-30402185

Looks similar to the pic above yet has brown hair and blue baggy pants with a red shirt and jacket [not sure about the Jacket color]

Jaden is a 15-year-old teenage boy who likes to fight, and eat food. He's like Goku when he's hungry. Anyway, his mother isn't alive really not sure why yet. I was thinking of it being a natural death but I'm not sure. Also, Jaden has a crush on Tara, one of the girls in his team. Jaden also has a wallet chain hanging out of his pocket. Black cut off gloves.

Cyrus

http://dragonspectre.deviantart.com/...runks-20751943

Looks like pic above yet has brown or purple hair, not sure which, and has a red jacket. Also his hair is a little bit more spike up than that. Cyrus also has a wallet chain hanging out of his pocket. Black cut off gloves.

Cyrus is more of the tough guy attitude; a bit short tempered and also likes to fight. He likes fight that is a match for him and people he can test out his fighting skills on. He also wears a shirt that has a logo on the back saying, "Get lost". He fairly often calls idiots or his enemy's certain names, like a giant buff yet stupid guy he called a "Block head" and said he has "more bronze than brains", and told him that God had apparently "forgot to give him a brain". Cyrus sofar coudn't care less about Kira, she annoys the heck out of him.

Tara

http://zeal-nightwolf.deviantart.com...-hair-39763505

That looks a lot like her. Tara will either has brown of pink hair like Sakura, not sure.

Tara possibly might like Jaden too, and she is on the same team. Not much to say about her really.

Max

http://brocken-jr.deviantart.com/art...Goten-22751734

This pic above looks similar to Max except he has a little bit more spiked up hair and blue shirt and blue pants.

He's the goofball that usually gives this show its times of comedy it once in a while has. He is pretty full of himself and thinks he's awesome. His attitude is similar to Gotenks from the anime DBZ. He's a show off pretty much; he also tries to impress the girls pretty much by fighting some villains and whatever. Also funny thing is, when he wakes he's usually on the edge of the bed and slips of falling his noggin. Which really wakes him up also P'O'ing him.

Kira

http://aoiska.deviantart.com/art/Ino-31194118

This looks pretty similar to her except she has black or brown hair and this her likely trying to impress Cyrus. Although, Cyrus will probably just walk off without a sound, while she reads his shirt the says get lost on the back. She's like

Girl that likes Cyrus and many times tries to impress Cyrus

Uhh...Sorry I put so much information I just wanted to show you what my story was like and as usual I got carried away -_-' Anyway Please reply, I don't want to type all this for nothing.

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