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Old 12-07-2006, 05:59 PM   #16   [permalink]
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Another poem from Rei. How exciting.

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A legless, soulless doll
lies at the end of the tunnel.
This is not the light you expected.
A doll which made mankind
and which mankind uses
to make dolls of their own.
I find myself as I dig through
the walls at the end of the tunnel.
I am not the light I expected.
A faceless black form mimics my own.
Shadows fall; that is to be expected.
A sky of red seen by eyes of red.
That is not the answer I am seeking.
Eyes of red hidden behind glass of red.
Could this be the piece I am missing?
Time stands still on a plot of land
with no intended purpose.
None of this was what we expected.
Water the land.
Rushing water and air.
The color blue reflected in glass of red.
It cannot be seen.
It cannot be seen.
Who are you?
A question you cannot answer, for
it cannot be seen.
Glass: created from fire.
Fire: devourer of life.
Life singed by the flames.
Blood: the sustenance of a life.
Nothing is rising from his feet of clay except
all of his dreams and all of the
ideals of man.
The Son of Man, the Daughter of Lilith.
Lilith: not to be regarded as one of mankind.
Angels: Inhuman.
Justification for their destruction?
Red glass reflects blood.
The reflection...
it cannot be seen.
From this angle...
From any angle...
The definition of “why” is a question of its own.
“Is” is a word which defines all there is to be.
“Be” is what is done by all that is.
The orchid.
The rose.
A field of flowers...
A plain of grass...
The blades are all identical,
and the blades are numerous,
but to remove one would be to change the whole.
Echoes live on inside the doll.
Soul doll.
Sew up the soul doll.
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Old 17-07-2006, 09:12 PM   #17   [permalink]
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thats a long poem
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Old 18-07-2006, 03:16 PM   #18   [permalink]
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Shorter than the poem she actually recited in the series.
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Old 18-07-2006, 06:31 PM   #19   [permalink]
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Old 18-07-2006, 07:07 PM   #20   [permalink]
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yeah.

...not sure where to take this now.

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“So, Dr. Akagi, apparently contemplative silence translates into elitism in this day and age.” Gendo Ikari said mordantly, his gloved hands hovering somewhere near his mouth as they ceaselessly folded and unfolded.
“No, but you’re a prick regardless.” hissed the unnaturally blond doctor with narrowed eyes and gritted teeth.
Gendo’s left hand took a momentary break from its dance with the right hand to slide his thin wire-frame glasses further up the bridge of his nose. He put on his trademark expression, a biting mixture of focus and virulence, and then shifted his seat slightly to face Ritsuko Akagi completely. His hands were now resting in the folded position, effectively obscuring the lower half of his face.
“So was criticism of my demeanor the only thing you wished to present me with, or did you actually have a rational reason to approach me?” Gendo interrogated.
The doctor’s face tensed up into a portrait of repugnance and it looked as if she was about to begin shouting some particularly spiteful things in a particularly rambling, hysterical manner. It relaxed in a few seconds, however, before she tilted her head, forced her lips into a polite smile, and stated “The EX series of Evangelions will not react to the dummy plug system. They almost seem to be rejecting it.”
Behind the intertwining white cloth of his fingers, Gendo did not appear content at all.
“Are you experiencing any difficulties with the original series?” he spoke coolly, his voice seeming to be almost disembodied due to the lack of visible motion from his mouth, hands, or eyes.
“No sir. They are operating as they always have. EX-1, however, is in what seems to be a consistently berserk state: she tries to remove its restraints and once made an attempt at removing her own plug. She critically damaged the area of insertion."
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Old 27-09-2006, 08:34 PM   #21   [permalink]
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hey dranix post in my topic
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Old 27-09-2006, 09:58 PM   #22   [permalink]
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Old 28-09-2006, 01:42 PM   #23   [permalink]
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Dude, eva2015. Don't be so judgemental. ADdispatcher adopted me at one point in time.
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Old 28-09-2006, 08:08 PM   #24   [permalink]
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Sorta reviving an older topic here... But I find ur writing quite captivating, AD. U really got into the character's heads. The monologues sound exactly like them; u must understand each character very well. Also, the way the thoughts are writtin kind of disjointedly (like how Shinji contradicts himself) really mimic the way people actually think. That's not easy to do. I hope u write more... I've really enjoyed it.
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Old 13-05-2007, 10:30 PM   #27   [permalink]
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Old 22-08-2008, 06:06 AM   #28   [permalink]
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Rei's head sure is wierd. Why does everybody Like Rei? and why is Shinji so doubting of himself? his father is the head of NERV. Those two questions I'd like to ask.
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Old 07-09-2008, 02:33 PM   #29   [permalink]
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Why does everybody Like Rei?
I don't like Rei. That makes your statement untrue.

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and why is Shinji so doubting of himself? his father is the head of NERV.
His father treated him like a tool, he has no mother, he has no friends to emotionally support him, he can't figure out why he's piloting a giant piece of crap and fighting more pieces of crap to save the earth, he has to live with a bitch called Asuka, he has to live with Mishallow Katsuragi, and he's afraid of learning more about himself including his dark side.
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And there it is.
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