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Old 17-04-2001, 04:53 PM   #1   [permalink]
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Are You There

I walk on the beach
All alone
Yet you are there
Fewling your presents
I look for you
In the sand
In the ocean
But your not there
Yet you are
Beside me you hold my hand
But when I look back I only see my foot prints
How I miss you
But you're here
Then again you aren't
I feel you all around me
Are you watching from above
Or are you really walking besides me, invisable
My heart aches to feel your body
But is content with you here
I wake up
KNowing you are there laying besides me
I turn smiling hoping to see your face
You aren't there
I cry alone
But I know your watching me somewhere
And that You will always be with me
In my heart


This was written when I had a hard time taking in my grandfathers death. I would forget he wasn't in florida waiting to see me in his next vacation. But then I was smacked. It was and is hard
(just shake your head and pretend you know what Im talking about!)

Im inocent I really am even if you dont believe me.

Dont mess with me because I might like it and then youll never get rid of me!

Just because I wont let you have my a$$ doesnt mean it isnt cute!
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Old 18-04-2001, 05:27 PM   #2   [permalink]
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That was one of the most touching poems I've read. Maybe because I can relate to how you feel. My grandfather also died.

sorry about your grandfather

post more poems,
you are a natural
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Old 18-04-2001, 05:54 PM   #3   [permalink]
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wow thats a great poem. also im sorry to hear about your grandfather
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