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Old 20-03-2003, 11:04 PM   #1   [permalink]
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More Kenshin Fan Art

This is my first attempt at coloring on Photoshop.
I did the line art with just a normal Pilot Extra Fine tip pen, and i did the coloring with Photoshop 6.0



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Old 20-03-2003, 11:10 PM   #2   [permalink]
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Eyes. Nose. Hands. Creases.

The coloring's pretty good, though.
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Old 20-03-2003, 11:11 PM   #3   [permalink]
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That doesnt help me by just listing things but, hey...
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Old 21-03-2003, 01:45 AM   #4   [permalink]
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katana/tanto is on the wrong side,the arc should be the other way.The angle of the head do not totaly match the angle of the face.we should see the inside of kenshin right handle(near his hand)
kenshin left thumb look like is on kenshin hand wich is actualy impossible.

dont get me wrong the pic is very nice and the coloring too. ^-^

keep up the good work
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Old 21-03-2003, 02:23 AM   #5   [permalink]
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Looks good!

Nice colors!
I've to agree with what Megumi H has mentioned, the eyes are different in shape compared to each other and lacks a cornea (or whatever). Further more the bridge of his nose is too short and the line of the bottom of his nose is too long....uhm...you know what I mean? The nose look alot like an "L"....right, so let's say the horizontal line is too long.
The hands looks like a hammer/mallet, the knuckles shouldn't be alined like that, there's suppose to be different in height a bit.
Further more the sword looks too short.
The backside of his head is much higher than the front which is wrong I think.
I also have to agree with the critcism made by Dain (Welcome to AB ) about the angle and the thumb.
Other than that, good job!
Keep up the good work eh!
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Old 21-03-2003, 08:45 AM   #6   [permalink]
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The thing that stuck out at me was the knuckles. They just need to be lined up differently. And maybe the eyes need an iris. They look very blank and 'unKenshin'-like. Nice job of manipulating Photoshop on your first time.

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Old 21-03-2003, 09:10 AM   #7   [permalink]
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Thanks peoples...
This picture only took me like a half an hour to draw (which is very very short for me, most of my good ones take like 2 hours) iwanted to see if i could color it...
But ill critisize it too.
Both hands arent right, eyes have no coloring (i thought it looked cool ) katana way to short...

Thx people for helping me improve

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Old 21-03-2003, 11:58 AM   #8   [permalink]
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The hair, costume and expression are all pretty sweet. Is that a scar on his face?
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Old 22-03-2003, 05:16 PM   #9   [permalink]
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Cool Kenshin! I really like how you CGed the pic. Adding a highlight tone might improve the overall appeal of the piccie ^^; Regardless, It's cool~ XD
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