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Old 24-03-2003, 01:39 AM   #1   [permalink]
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Talking Ninja!

Hey-o Everyone me and my friend want to create a comic (hopefully we'll actually do it) and this is may be one of the characters in it.
I want to add more to him but change takes time and lots of thinking...
I did the lineart with a Pilot Extra Fine Pen and the coloring on Photoshop 6.
Tell me what ya think.



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I need help with the feet if someone could just edit the pic to give me an idea of what they should look like...

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Old 24-03-2003, 02:47 AM   #2   [permalink]
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Nice!

Looks pretty neat!
A pupil would be nice to have, he looks kinda spooky as he's now.
The hands seems too small.
Those large red 'plates' looks kinda useless and unconvienent.....it makes the Ninja look less flexible/limber and less fast somehow, it just would hinder the ninja's movement.
About the feets (and perhaps other body parts, details etc.), check the picture below (it's not mine).
Hopefully you and your friend will create the comic soon, I'd like to see it!
Keep up the good work eh!

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Old 24-03-2003, 01:14 PM   #3   [permalink]
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Thanks for the help i think im going to redraw him...
Me and my friend really need to right the story before we draw the characters but hey! I was bored...
Were gonna try to find some time to think of the story but as of now we dont know when but when we get it done ill be sure to post it.
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Old 24-03-2003, 01:39 PM   #4   [permalink]
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Nice gradient use ^^ I agree ith Eva-00 on the other crits, and hopefully you'll post your manga soon.
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Old 24-03-2003, 11:27 PM   #5   [permalink]
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Nice gradient use ^^ I agree ith Eva-00 on the other crits, and hopefully you'll post your manga soon.
Thx but i doubt it will be anytime soon tho...

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Those large red 'plates' looks kinda useless and unconvienent.....it makes the Ninja look less flexible/limber and less fast somehow, it just would hinder the ninja's movement.
Then why is Shinobi wearing them in Shinobi 3?
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Old 25-03-2003, 03:26 AM   #6   [permalink]
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Well.....I could just ask you the same thing as well, then why are some (perhaps most) Ninja's don't wear them (ie. "Ninja shadow of darkness" etc.)?
Look, you don't have to agree with my critcism.
It's just my thought and my way how I see a Ninja, the way how I see it....they don't have those large plates like that....but that's just me. I think it's unconvienent and I think those are more appropriate to samurai's (in my point of view, you don't have to agree).
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Old 26-03-2003, 01:34 AM   #7   [permalink]
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Hm. I think the biggest problem with the "large red plates" is that the ones on the hands look very stiff, and would hamper wrist movement (which seems to be very important to a ninja). Perhaps if you made them bend at the wrists, they'd work better. ::shrugs:: Looks good, though. All the other C&C I have has been done already.
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