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Old 06-04-2003, 04:36 AM   #1   [permalink]
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Red face the GIRL in Green?

ahh>>> kay' just something i did after i saw this cute little avatar doin' this crazy dance!
anyway i tried a new way of shading, highlights! I like the results...hhhmmmm?

maybe should've gone with a dance pose instead.....

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Old 06-04-2003, 11:01 AM   #2   [permalink]
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It's good...

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I'll start with pointing out asymmetrism; a) the two sides of her face is of different lenght, or is that an illusion caused by the placement of her facial features? And b) her eyes're of different sizes. While we're talking about bodily features placed wrong: I think the ear's placed too high.
I'll continue with the hands, I think all artists loathe those, I certainly do. A) Her palm seems to be smaller than the fingers. B) The fingers look awkward, sort of crooked.
I myself don't colour my drawings, mostly because I don't know about any techniques; I can't comment about the highlights stuff because of that. Anyway. Is that carrot juice on the inside of her tights? The colour just doesn't seem to fit in there.
It's good, as I mentioned in the beginning. Not only true to your own style, which is good I might add, but also overall good.

Cute jumping smilie.

Sorry if I seem a little harsh, just got out, or am on my way out, of a period of illness. I'm a bit grumpy because of that.

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Old 06-04-2003, 04:00 PM   #3   [permalink]
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I like it a lot, you have a videogame-ish style of coloring that really like ^_^
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Old 06-04-2003, 06:23 PM   #4   [permalink]
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It really looks like a character concept pic for, a game as Nefla said, or an RPG or something like that. Which is a good thing I might add.^^
I also think one side of her face, the right one, looks a wee bit long somehow.
And also, if you look at her ribcage-area, and where the breasts are, that area looks really small/thin/narrow when compared to her hips. Yes, of course the hips are supposed to be a bit bigger or broader in general, but something looks off, maybe it's the legs that are too far apart and a bit skinny..? Or it could be that her torso just looks too long and thin overall, maybe you should have put her breasts a little further down..?
Heh, I'm sorry I'm blabbing like this, but something just looks a little off. Oh well.^^;;
However, overall I think it's very neat, and she's really cute. And the colors you've used works well together and I think you've done a very good job with it. ^_^
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Old 06-04-2003, 07:25 PM   #5   [permalink]
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The colours look really nice together.
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Old 07-04-2003, 12:03 PM   #6   [permalink]
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I really really love your style
Keep it up!
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Old 07-04-2003, 06:39 PM   #7   [permalink]
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I think her legs are either too far apart, or at the wrong angles.
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Old 07-04-2003, 11:21 PM   #8   [permalink]
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Some anatomy quibbles aside, this is a great pic, I love your style. Beautiful coloring, post more please.

What kind of coloring techniques were you using?? Just in general?
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Old 08-04-2003, 01:50 PM   #9   [permalink]
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I like this picture a lot, and i know everyone else has said it, but I like the colouring too ^_^
Looks like something right out of the Kingdom Hearts game. The specularity on the eyes looks particularly impressive
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Old 09-04-2003, 05:58 AM   #10   [permalink]
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hmm...a few things i didn't notice myself
thanx guys...
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Old 10-04-2003, 05:14 PM   #11   [permalink]
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As always, I luv your artwork ^_^. I think that your new shading/highlighting technique is excellent and works well with the composition to give form and etc. Post more~
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